For __wilderness__ as a birthday pressie here is some more meta rambaling about chapters 3&4 of The Sins Of The Past.

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Shock horror a pice of non fiction!! As a result of my being a meme sheep herein are my musingings and directors commentory on The Sins Of The Past chapters 1&2 the rest are coming later.

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So having insisted I edit this the muse decided to take a holiday on me, which I why this is late and probably naff. Most of the editing here is to smooth out the whole who's talking when issues that riddled the original.

Title: The Sins Of The Past.
Setting: G1h
Rating: NC-17 for the story, this chapter is a PG13 for special ops being special ( Read more... )

Title: The Sins Of The Past.
Setting: G1
Rating: NC-17 for the story, this chapter is a PG13 for Mirage and Bumblebee being ruthless special ops agents and plotting cold oiled revenge.
Characters: Jazz, Mirage, Bumblebee, ensemble and OC’s.
Warning: Nothing much for this one, lots of talking about doing nasty stuff but no actual doing.
Summary: No ( Read more... )

Points at the warning, possible even more unhappy than the last chapter here peoples.

Title: The Sins Of The Past.
Setting: G1
Rating: NC-17 for the story and this chapter.
Characters: Jazz, Mirage, Bumblebee, ensemble and OC’s.
Warning: Still earning the rating here. More torture, angst and death lurk behind the cut this week.
Summary: No ( Read more... )

This is not a story to start the week with, unless you're looking to be depressed and maybe freaked out by the end of the chpater.

Title: The Sins Of The Past.
Setting: G1
Rating: NC-17 for the story and this chapter.
Characters: Jazz, Mirage, Bumblebee, ensemble and OC’s.
Warning: This is where the story starts to earn its rating folks. This ( Read more... )

Later than it should be but earlier than last week.

Title: The Sins Of The Past
Setting: G1
Rating: NC-17 for the story, this chapter is a 12 for mild violence
Characters: Jazz, Mirage, Bumblebee, ensemble and OC’s
Warning: I was in a very weird and unhappy headspace when this came along and sunk its teeth in, this is not going to be a happy ( Read more... )

Sorry for the delay in posting last weeks chapter but RL has kinda got in the way! So with out further waffle from me:

Title: The Sins Of The Past
Setting: G1
Rating: NC-17 for the story, this chapter is a 12 for mild violence and implied historical nastiness.
Characters: Jazz, Mirage, Bumblebee, ensemble and OC’s
Warning: I was in a very ( Read more... )

Having had two lots of crack up here this weekend here's something darker.

Title: The Sins Of The Past
Setting: G1
Rating: NC-17 for the story, this chapter rates a 12A for remembered violence.
Characters: Jazz, Mirage, Bumblebee, ensemble and OC’s
Warning: I was in a very weird and unhappy headspace when this came along and sunk its teeth in, ( Read more... )

I've finally got around to making a start on editing the first ever TF story I posted up over on FF.net, the first few chapters have been terrorized by the red pen of experience and I'm aiming to post a chapter a week.

Title: The Sins Of The Past
Setting: G1
Rating: NC-17 for the story, this chapter just gets a strong PG
Characters: Jazz, Mirage, ( Read more... )